A Young Life snuffed out in an instant by a speeding driver
A Mid-Life so full of memories, becoming rapidly unknown
A Mature Life declared terminal by a slow-moving diagnosis
Bad surprises make us stand still
Hold our breath
Fall to the floor screaming
Look life in the eyes
Open your heart to hope
Lift yourself up
Gather strength through others and within yourself
Seek out joy
Remind yourself why you are here
Each moment is a step towards a new beginning
The first 3 lines of this piece are bits of news that are close to home. We know we cannot control serious illness and sudden tragedy. No words can offer real comfort. We can gather together and hold one another close and stay grateful for what we have and are there for one another.
Life is so very fragile. Find your joy today.
Thanks to Kellie Elmore for this power Free Write Friday prompt. And I have the added bonus in making it another poem for poetry month!
So true. And something we should remember when we leave our loved ones in anger.
Your response was so beautifully written and heartfelt.
Thank you Colline. My mother used to say the same thing. I always try to be mindful and make sure issues or disagreements are worked out and goodbyes are never taken for granted either.
So heartfelt, Kim, a thought provoking response and you write it so well. Oliana xx
Indeed, this came straight from recent personal experience as well as past. Today I get to be with those affected by recent events. And that’s what we’ll do together- just be…
“Bad surprises make us stand still ” A genuine circumstance, we forget to breathe as void fill with darkness, reminds me upon being in a well, everything there after in a past time. With what people go through, making time for one another now, we should all do, as it doesn’t take much for our worlds to change. Love the work you’ve put in to the above piece.
That is so true. Life can be divided into the Before and After when seismic shifts rock our world. I appreciate your response, Sean! 🙂
Very powerful indeed. You have created something beautiful and strong from broken pieces, thank you!
Thank you my dear. The breaking apart has revealed a new perspective and appreciation.